Kudos for trying! There are lots of complicated formulas regarding air flow, and what shapes work best in different applications. A general principle to remember is that air flows at maximum efficiency from high pressure to low pressure, much like wind in the environment.
Thus, with a fan involved, you want to increase pressure on the fan inlet side, and ensure that the outlet side of the fan is not obstructed, thus allowing pressure to decrease.
NACA ducts are their own engineering subset, with shapes formulated by engineers. In later years, computer modeling and wind tunnels helped increase efficiency. The vents you are building are a type of NACA duct.
When you engineer vents like you propose, you may want to prepare a few versions, then try them out. Try inexpensive and easy-to-make versions first, even plywood should work. Then, when your test results show you which version is most effective, you can fine-tune the shape, using aluminum or galvanized sheet metal.
My suggestion is that you test and record your results with the various iterations. To do that accurately, you would need to replicate conditions as closely as possible for test 1, 2, 3, etc. Ambient air temp may be the most critical factor that should be kept as standard and constant as possible. I suggest that you develop a means of measuring oil temp even if you don't have an oil temp gauge. Put marks on your dial gauge or something similar to tell you what the oil temp is when the gauge is at point X. A candy thermometer or something similar in the dipstick can tell you actual oil temp.
Then drive the same course at the same rpm with your different vents in place, and try to keep air temps the same for each driving test. I know that we don't have test tracks like the big dogs, but do your best to keep conditions the same. Cars immediately ahead of you will influence your test results, so a road with little traffic is preferable.
Test results may surprise you. Please keep the group informed, as this is how we all learn.